HomeMy WebLinkAboutWRITTEN COMMENTS 05/05/15May 5, 2015, PB&R Agenda Comments
Comments on Newport Beach Parks, Beaches and Recreation Commission agenda submitted by:
Jim Mosher ( jimmosher@yahoo.com ), 2210 Private Road, Newport Beach 92660 (949-548-6229)
Item (4)A. Minutes of the April 7, 2015 meeting.
The following corrections are suggested:
Page 2, last paragraph: “Christy Kristi Jackson provided additional information about the
independent arborist …” [note: full name is “Kristin,” suggested spelling is from March minutes]
Page 3, motion: “… additionally, provide information to the neighbors regarding a 48” box
Tomlinson Ash Tree as a replacement tree, …”
Page 4, paragraph 2: “Assistant Chief (Lifeguard Operations) Rob Williams introduced himself
…”
Page 6, first full paragraph, last sentence: “He urged the Commission to keep the current
regulation in place and keeping keep the area for body boarders.”
Page 7, paragraph 5: “Amy Tilo, Endless Sun Surf School, stated …” [? I haven’t attempted to
verify most of the speakers’ names, but in this case the names given on the school’s website and
Facebook page are Tim and Amy Reda (formerly Amy Lowry ?)]
Page 8, line 1: “Brett Brent Ranek stated that he is a retired City of Newport Beach Lifeguard
…”
Page 8, paragraph 2: “Tim Tilo, Endless Sun Surf School stated …” [See earlier comment.
Should “Tilo” be “Reda”? As a City contractor, perhaps someone could ask who the speakers were?]
Page 8, after close of public discussion, paragraph 1, sentence 3: “He reminded the audience
that everyone will get "another bite of the apple" when this matter is presented to City Council.”
[Isn’t the expression in this context "another bite at the apple"?]
Page 8, after close of public discussion, paragraph 3, last sentence: “He urged the Commission
to consider Mr. Reddick's Ranek’s statements and reiterated the need for a procedure for
enforcement.”
Page 8, line 3 from end: “… it is the decision by the Lifeguard Captain and / or Watch
Commander.”
Page 10, Item D, paragraph 1: “Assistant Chief (Lifeguard Operations) Rob Williams …”
Page 13, paragraph 2 from end:: “Kevin Murphy stated that the fact of lifeguards not being
around during specific times of the year should not result as a detriment to wave riders.”
Page 14, after close of public discussion, paragraph 2: “Josh Joaquim Yocam again stated
that he was speaking on behalf of … and stated that the Association stands against
recommendation recommendations 1 and 2.”